Thread:Ewanme99/@comment-26383377-20160822034751

The horrible mishmash of words and deleted sentences were barely enough to describe what I had in mind for this, autocorrect (somehow) and the inability to see what I am typing ended up with something horrible. Let me send you a paragraph that would look good.

An Empire that was founded on unity and equality, but grew on corruption, greed. And the thirst for aggressive expansion. The Ostoran Empire was once ruled by a benevolent King. Who cared for his people, and in turn was loved by then. But the King Hynthar was struck by illness. And was left to decide which of his three sons he would select as his heir. Jyir the Eversteel, a kind-hearted metal-loving man. Who would forge the hardest steel, but hat our the softest heart. People were skeptical of his rule, if he had the mettle to be king. But one thing was certain, if he was chosen, then the Ostorans would have the greatest steel mills that have ever graced the planet. Then, they had Berthus the Valiant. A fearsome warrior in battle, he served as his father's commander of armies. And his tactical knowledge knows no boundaries, however, he is very inept when it comes to social interaction. And discussions which don't require much logic.

And then, there was Danus the Abolished son. Danus was the eldest son, he was the first Commander of Armies in the history of the Ostoran Empire. But, soon after he gained this power, he committed unspeakable atrocities. Which were so unfathomable that his father decided to renounce his heirship and disown him as a son. But Danus was fueled by rage, and raised an army of unflinchingly loyal Knights and mercenaries. And attacked the core of the Ostoran Empore, killing his father, and his brothers. Which left him as the only possible heir to the throne. Forcing the Council to instill him as King. Shortly after he was placed upon his mantle, he disbanded the Council. Instead using a collection of his chosen military, and economic advisors. Those composed the new Ostoran Council. Which was often accused of being corrupt, but any who would dare say such a thing was hung, burnt alive... Or maybe even worse.

Hefty taxes, obligatory conscription. The tyrannical Danus wrapped his greedy Fingers around his empire and milked it of its worth. But instead of shrivels and dying. This prompted the empire to expand aggressively. Taking over new lands. And now Danus controlled his empire, with his trusted first and only son leading his elite force of Inquisitorial Knights.

But, arguably the worst atrocity that was committed by far was the Danus Decree. Which claimed that humanity was the superior species, and all others were inferior to its might. Animals and even savage tribesmen were the property of humanity. Who would use them as mere tools to aid their expansion. And so, massive Slave roads were constructed, shipping slaves all around to be bought, sold, to be forced to work. Or to fall in the hands of a cruel master. 